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AS I SIT HERE
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Created on 3-30-08
AS I SIT HERE
I TRY TO REMEMBER MY LIFE
BUT ALL I SEEM TO REMEMBER
IS THAT OF A DREAM
THE EMPTYNESS
I FEEL INSIDE
THE DARKNESS I SEE IN THE WORLD
ALL REMIND ME OF A TIME
BEFORE I WAS HERE ON THIS EARTH
WAS IT A PAST LIFE
OR JUST A MOVIE I SAW?
OF THIS I'LL NEVER KNOW
Please Login to post comments| On March 31st 2008 mellamoo01 Said : | |
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i have to agree with sixtiesdoll those two lines are my favourtie as well, nice work =] |
| On March 31st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I'm liking it. The past life reference, or just a movie. I like that line the most. Lovely job:) |
| On March 31st 2008 ShiningKanin Said : | |
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it's very good! i like it! |
| On March 30th 2008 keegan4606 Said : | |
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love it! |
| On March 30th 2008 Jermie6363 Said : | |
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this is good |
| On March 30th 2008 avder Said : | |
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I like it! |
