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an random sonnet that i wroteRate this Poem
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Created:
06/03 2008
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96
Category:
Pain
My Poems
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5
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My broken Dreams |
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10
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why coulndt i see |
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5
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Changed!? |
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5
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Tears |
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4
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scream of passion |
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4
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does it reach you? |
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12
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To a lost Friend |
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3
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Take wat you left behind |
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10
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How much i love you! |
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sonnet |
sonnet
With love in her heart and sorrow in her eyes
The pain stricken love abundant and unfair
She hides the tears with a smile so very fair
Watching a once great love fall to its demise
She talks and acts as if it had no affect
But while inside she crumbled, stained, and sad
Begs for his return and the life they once had
Has no where to go, no family or friends what’s to expect
Tears that fall making a permanent pathway
Hoping to move one and live happy again
Knowing it will be hard to fall in love
Trying to push the image far away
Screaming in horror of blood in the den
The remains of him and the death of her love
| On June 4th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said: |
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| omg you mad me cry abby... :( love it |
| On June 4th 2008 keegan4606 Said: |
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| lovley! :D! |
| On June 3rd 2008 Pikkakard Said: |
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| Very good. A great read indeed |
| On June 3rd 2008 deadpoet Said: |
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| this was definitely better than the last one you asked me to read |
| On June 3rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| wow cool... Nice work~ |


