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does it reach you?
whispering my good byes in the wind
hoping it will reach you
wish u can hear the pain in my voice
and realize that i really loved you
letting my tears fall in the rain
so maybe you can see the difference between
the rain falling on my face and the tears comming out of my eyes
i scream im the thunder
wondering if you can even hear me
hoping youll fell my pain and acome to me
and when i finally see you holding her in your arms
i just smile and hide my pain
say im happy for you .and know its a lie
and te next day all see in me is the scars
scares asking does it reach u?
can you feel the pain u made me go thru
looking away, trying to hide the pain
and all you say is:
Im sorry it your pain didnt reach me sooner.
but its to late cuz im lost and dead in a puddle of blood.
| On April 18th 2008 GangstaSam89 Said: |
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| awwww |
| On March 11th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said: |
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| awwww....im sooo feeling this ...... |
| On March 8th 2008 Snooky9e Said: |
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| awww...does my little salvi need someone to talk to...u know im alwayz here if ya need to chat...very good poem... |


