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can you see me

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Created: 03/07 2008
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Category: Pain

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sonnet

does it reach you?

whispering my good byes in the wind

hoping it will reach you

wish u can hear the pain in my voice

and realize that  i really loved you

 

letting my tears fall in the rain

so maybe you can see the difference between

the rain falling on my face and the tears comming out of my eyes

 

i scream im the thunder

wondering if you can even hear me

hoping youll fell my pain and acome to me

 

and when i finally see you holding her in your arms

i just smile and hide my pain

say im happy for you .and know its a lie

 

and te next day all see in me is the scars

scares asking does it reach u?

can you feel the pain u made me go thru

 

looking away, trying to hide the pain

and all you say  is:

Im sorry it your pain didnt reach me sooner.

but its to late cuz im lost and dead in a puddle of blood.

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On April 18th 2008 GangstaSam89 Said: 
GangstaSam89 awwww
On March 11th 2008 13sweetcheeks Said: 
13sweetcheeks awwww....im sooo feeling this ......
On March 8th 2008 Snooky9e Said: 
Snooky9e awww...does my little salvi need someone to talk to...u know im alwayz here if ya need to chat...very good poem...