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hush little girl, dont say a word
we're gonna play, so i wont be bored
if you make a sound or cry
baby dont forget you will be tied
and if you try to run away
youll get hurt, i wont be swayed
lay on the bed and close your eyes
and ill fill your ears with my sighs
do what i say, please me now
and dont you dare ask me how
stop crying or ill have to yell
stop right now or ill show you hell
you cant fight your not that strong
i know what im doing is very wrong
now im done so ill leave you here
just keep in mind ill always be near
and if you think you want to tell
you will wish you never rebelled
now goodnight my young innocent dove
this was just the first of my love
| On April 22nd 2008 emily200819 Said : | |
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I think that this is a very emotional poem. I wanted to cry. Im sorry that happened to you. I understand. |
| On April 22nd 2008 lostvampire09 Said : | |
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please comment i would really like to know if it is halfway decent or i it totally sucks this is my first time letting anyone see a poem like this and this one mentally hurt me to write i cried the whole time i was writing so someone please comment |


