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Falling stars

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I look to you to learn about me.

I may not like the answers I see.

Try as I may the things you say.

Make me greater but still ashamed.

 

I still do make mistakes,

and still hide that I too can break.

With young wisdom I still ain't done.

Pacifiy now, but so much to yet overcome.

 

I know I often don't say it.

Or even begin to portray it.

I know that its hard, me hiding all the cards.

Taunting like the unreachable stars.

 

It's the only way that I know.

But to you I am still devoted.

So look to the stars, and I'll still try hard

Cause stars do fall, they just have to fly far.

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On February 13th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic I love it!
On January 15th 2008 poet77 Said :
poet77 some of the rhymes seemed forced but i loved the first stanza
On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess That was really great. I love it.