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Falling stars
I look to you to learn about me.
I may not like the answers I see.
Try as I may the things you say.
Make me greater but still ashamed.
I still do make mistakes,
and still hide that I too can break.
With young wisdom I still ain't done.
Pacifiy now, but so much to yet overcome.
I know I often don't say it.
Or even begin to portray it.
I know that its hard, me hiding all the cards.
Taunting like the unreachable stars.
It's the only way that I know.
But to you I am still devoted.
So look to the stars, and I'll still try hard
Cause stars do fall, they just have to fly far.
| On February 13th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I love it! |
| On January 15th 2008 poet77 Said : | |
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some of the rhymes seemed forced but i loved the first stanza |
| On January 14th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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That was really great. I love it. |


