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time it was when i wrote this for school

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The Ticking

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The "ticking", and the "tocking"

then a sudden rearangement.

 "Bing,Bang"

tewleve times it repets itself,

then goes back to the "ticking" and "tocking"

there is a breeze where no breeze should be.

the movment over heads that circle arould, and arould.

in the distance there are pecocks that are startle,

A rooster crows confusly,

yet a cricket sings a smoothing song,

tis not night nor day,

tis a color,

dark,

yet light,

midnight.

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On July 3rd 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth I liked this quite a bit.
On May 11th 2008 lonercc Said :
lonercc srry for the missed spelled words.. ^^