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I Remember

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I remember the smell of the rose on my grandmas coffin.                   

I remember how my mom held me when I was little.

I remember the smell of the rain in England.

I remember my dad sitting up all night with me when I was sick.

I remember my grandma feeding me crushed ice when I was ill.

I remember my grandpa giving me $5 to buy a teddy bear.

I remember the look my mom gave me when my brother and I got into a fight.

I remember how my aunt cryed when my grandma died.

I remember the christmas I got my dog Adam.

I remember playing with my brothers in the woods.

And most importantly I remember the words my grandma spoke to me before she died, "Don't cry for me, because I will be in heaven."

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On April 16th 2007 lizandmike422 Said :
lizandmike422 That is a very touching poem you wrote... Keep up the good work! You express yourself well!
On April 7th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle oh thats nice
On March 19th 2007 cherrycokecat Said :
cherrycokecat I like this one
On February 14th 2007 uthorn10 Said :
uthorn10 Beautiful!!!!!!!
On February 13th 2007 ANA002 Said :
ANA002 beautiful
On February 10th 2007 DOAvsGOW Said :
DOAvsGOW nice work
On January 22nd 2007 titarita Said :
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awwww i thought that was soo sweet.
On January 14th 2007 sweetbeth87 Said :
sweetbeth87 Makes me remmber all the times I had when I was growing up. My grandma died of brain cancer when I was 10. So I can relate to this poem. Great job! ♥
On January 14th 2007 sunny102 Said :
sunny102 How thoughtful of you to write about your family. I think that's so sweet of you.
On January 14th 2007 espii Said :
espii read this without the "my" in front of everything except "my brother" and "my dog" and "my sunt" and just feel out how it sounds. i think it makes it more personal. we all know she's your grandma, and your mom, and your dad... the my is unneccessary, but either way is fine. also, maybe switch lines 5 and 6 around. just some suggestions.
On January 14th 2007 funnysonny25 Said :
funnysonny25 Very Awesome Job!! keep It Up!! Check Out My Poem!
On January 13th 2007 emoSpaceCadet Said :
emoSpaceCadet Good work. Check out my stuff, if you'd like.
On January 13th 2007 mattmurderface Said :
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Aww this is nice, it's kinda sad though...
On January 13th 2007 amberrae1555 Said :
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i like it a lot!!!
On January 13th 2007 motocrossluv42 Said :
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OMG.... that poem is really sweet n cute....
On January 13th 2007 OddsAndEvenSOs Said :
OddsAndEvenSOs memories are tough. but good to remember. lol i like it
On January 13th 2007 bettyboop8997 Said :
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that is the most realest poem ever
On January 13th 2007 k4t13 Said :
k4t13 its scary that i juat read this because im leaving for my grandmother wake in 10 minutes....
On January 13th 2007 bordovsky Said :
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omg that is soooooooo good that kinda the same for me but insted of my gma it was my grandpa and i remember the last thing he told me before he died he so don't worry honey everythings going to be alright and i love you very much. well thanks for reminding me your poem maade my day thanks
On January 13th 2007 shortie189 Said :
shortie189 aww..this is so sweet!!!
On January 13th 2007 gg4u Said :
gg4u cute
On January 13th 2007 sincerelyichab Said :
sincerelyichab so true..:P Nice work, though I do feel if you took out the periods and tried to make it flow it'd definitely be more aspiring...but one's opinion does not make another :P
On January 13th 2007 surferchick140 Said :
surferchick140 OMGosh i love that it's so close 2 u it's sooooooooo AWESOME