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The Months go on.
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Created on 1-13-07
The leaves fall in fall.
The snow comes down in Winter,
And the months go on.
Please Login to post comments| On April 2nd 2007 poopstix Said : | |
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It almost reminds me of an old lady sitting in her rocking chair and watching life fly by... |
| On February 27th 2007 hazeleyes89725 Said : | |
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I can feel the emotion coming through. Makes me want to just sit and dream of how life has been lately. |
| On February 17th 2007 psychoralu Said : | |
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do you like haiku? |
| On January 14th 2007 sweetbeth87 Said : | |
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At first it seems like its just a few words. But the more I thought about it the more the poem made sense. This poem made me think about everything that has happened in the past couple months. You poem leaves an impact on the reader. Great poem! ♥ |
| On January 14th 2007 CraZyRicky086 Said : | |
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So few words justify a lot. Good work. |
| On January 13th 2007 OddsAndEvenSOs Said : | |
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So little words give so much emotion. nice. |
| On January 13th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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geez....and your bragging my jokes. lame! |
| On January 13th 2007 gabbes Said : | |
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wow.... this seemingly is so full of emotion. It5 seems to paint a picture of endless nights, thoughts lost to time and a need that seems partially and restlessly empty. |
| On January 13th 2007 surferchick140 Said : | |
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doesn't makes sense 2 me but w/e |
