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Save me
Someone needs to help me, im falling through the floor. Someone needs to help me, because im feeling pain and i am sore.
The sore is opening into a hole, a hole thats jagged deep. Someone needs to get here, you cant let me go to sleep.
If i end up falling asleep, then i have a good chance to die. So someone needs to hurrie, someone adleast try.
Save me now from this empty heart, cuz im missing you so much. Come home to me right now, cuz i need to feel your touch.
| On June 24th 2007 jarnotti Said : | |
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wow thats really good keep it up |


