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Created on 1-23-08
why did you do it
no not to him
not to my best friend
you`ve hurt him deep inside a way i cant explain
you have hurt him so much he wants to take his life.
the pain that you have caused
if only you knew
that what he is doing is because of you
its not true its not true
they are rumors and lies non are true
i wish you could see just what i see
when i look at his face and his fake smile
you have hurt this boy why cant you tell
how much he loved he loved you
he thought you loved him aswell
Please Login to post comments| On April 18th 2008 lilemoannie Said : | |
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i adore it babie gurl
its amazing |
| On January 24th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said : | |
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thanks mat |
| On January 24th 2008 purelyevil7 Said : | |
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nice poem. i wud neav be able to come up wi sumthin like this |
| On January 24th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said : | |
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thanks for the advice i will tell him tht |
| On January 23rd 2008 native07mlj Said : | |
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oh sorry, and good writing too! k. later |
| On January 23rd 2008 native07mlj Said : | |
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whatta cow she is for hurting your best friend, tell your friend there are much better people out there that can treat him and love him better. K! |
| On January 23rd 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said : | |
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plz tell me what you think |
