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Views (49) Pain Created on 1-20-08 Flag

i hold your hand

but as soon as someone walks by you let go

tears in my eyes

pain in my heart

slowly slowly

i take my life 

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On March 2nd 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie babiie i'm sorri bout the ova comment i dunno wat i was on about chick i love your poetry darls annie
On January 23rd 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 then obviosly you dont no me annie
On January 22nd 2008 lilemoannie Said :
lilemoannie lolly wat u on about? u never got this upset and u arent even a proper emo, u wudnt ever take your life nd i no that as a fact
On January 20th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic There's something about the last two lines that I love.
On January 20th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said :
lolli2duble0h8 plz tell me wot u think