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sorry for it being long, idk >.

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I stand here before you,

ready to lose it all.

I don't car anymore

if I should succeed or fall.

But I hope

that you will accept the heart in my hand.

Taking into account that I am taking a stand.

That I'm risking it all.

For you, the one that I love.

My kryptonite.

My shining star.

The one I would chase no matter how far

or out of reach you may seem.

I'll always be there

to turn your gray clouds blue.

Never abandon you.

But no matter what I say,

I can't change the way

you think.

Your perception.

Your deepest feelings of deception.

'Cause you've been hurt.

You've been down.

Hitting the ground

hard.

But see, I want you to know

that I could be the hand to lift you up from your fall.

That is why I'm risking it all.

Standing here

with all my guards down;

all my defenses void.

Vulnerable.

Ready to take a beating to my heart.

Knowing there are no restarts.

Trusting

the fact that you'll be kind to my heart

that is pounding in front of your eyes 

with no disguise.

Staying true to the senses

and just being defenseless.

Because I trust you.

And you should trust me too

because no matter what you and me, what we go through

our souls will be intertwined to the point where we can stand 

and be strong.

Making right what was once wrong.

And will never be wrong again.

Because by being together,

we can make it through whatever.

Any kind of weather,

or trouble.

Any obstacles, come what may.

Our bond will last past even the day.

And I will never leave.

'Cause if I do,

I know I won't be able to

live another moment without you.

'Cause you're a part of me

which I cannot deny.

You're my soul that burns and smolders inside

me.

And I embrace the burn.

'Cause in turn of feeling that blazing heat

I know, with you, I will be complete.

That is why I must repeat

that I love you

and that will always be true.

Remembering the day when my eyes caught glance of you

and weren't able to move.

Just frozen in that moment,

not even able to breathe.

Standing there breathless,

knowing you're the one that I need.

And want

for forever and a day.

Loving each breath you take.

Oh!

So please don't leave me hanging;

catching dust with my heart.

With my head falling apart.

Waiting

and hoping that you'll come around;

to put me out of my misery

by one of two ways

whether by accepting my heart

or even just letting it rot away.

In my dismay.

But I need my heart

and you along with it.

Together:

Living.

Breathing.

Loving.

each moment spent with each other.

Forever. 

So here my heart is, for the taking. 

And the decision is yours, for the making.

Let there be no mistaking,

what I find to be true.

How I stand here to prove

that I LOVE YOU

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On February 23rd 2008 luvhim4ever12 Said :
luvhim4ever12 that is really good. really deep and sweet. i really like it
On February 13th 2008 blahidyblah929 Said :
blahidyblah929 cute!
On February 12th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord This is SOOOO good, A grate show of talent!!
On February 11th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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wow...flowed nicely for it being so long
On February 11th 2008 nickjonson Said :
nickjonson Nice. It's good. Few misspellings, but thats OK. Um, in the beginning, when u said "my kryptonite" that sorta butchered the effect, in my opinion. I went back and I was like "uhhh what? how does that fit in?" But besides that, it's good. This is good, dude. Do u mind if I use this as song lyrics? Not all of it, but parts. I'll give u credit for it.
On February 10th 2008 beautyisthewol Said :
beautyisthewol i love it. i had a feeling like this one time about 3 years ago. i know now that mine and his relationship together will never be, but i can say that i tried to fix what i had broken. and one last thing, you shouldn't apolegize for your own work.
On February 10th 2008 numba1chic Said :
numba1chic wow that was just, it was amazing. really sweet too. and it wasnt too long at all. i absolutely loved it, you have great talent
On February 10th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin i'm in awe really, it is an amazing, and never apoligize for anything you write, really all that matters is that you love what you write, you should be the only one you try to impress with your words and if the rest of us like it thats a bonus for you, but i really enjoyed it great job
On February 10th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol shall I proceed? I'm AMAZED by your poem, it's incredible, really I can hear this being written into a song, well done!
On February 10th 2008 PRiiSCiiLLA Said :
PRiiSCiiLLA Wow this is really good.
On February 9th 2008 California1516 Said :
California1516 awwwww..that was written good..and i agree with the fact that you shouldnt apologize for it being too long..everyone has a certain style to their poems. i really like how they are long..because it ends up sucking you in to them! it takes alot of talent to be able to capture and keep people interested, and u totally do that!! :)
On February 9th 2008 darkesttears13 Said :
darkesttears13 Thats a really good poem, better than any I've ever written.
On February 9th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Love it!
On February 9th 2008 Pikkakard Said :
Pikkakard Another really nice and well written poem.

The rhyming is great, too.

I wouldn't apologise for it being long

On February 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth AND THE CROWD GOES WILD!!! applause clap clap clap clap clap whistle MORE MORE (lighting lighter and waving fire in the air above my head) :)
On February 9th 2008 kimomega Said :
kimomega Thats so sweet! Aww[and sad] but sweet! I love it!