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haha. back in my "emo" days...Rate this Poem
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hold your breath. |
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image of night. |
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nogain. |
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you. |
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deceptions of the dream. |
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someday. |
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onthelighterside. |
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thegameoflove&style. |
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itisright. |
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lover'sthief. |
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lover'sthief.
arise the day, the morning sun
my life starts new, i have begun
i do what is right, and never fail
i go to you, my soul to tell
yet when i go, something is amist
i find you gave another your kiss
my heart beats fast, my hands they tremble
it feels my heart will disassemble
i gasp for breath, my head i shake
i cannot live, why did i wake
the tears i shed, turn to steam
i wish, i hope this is a dream
now from sorrow, do i wake
anger rises, my heart can't take
now all feelings have dissolved
yet one, anger, has evolved
you see me not, so i run away
i come back the, without delay
in my hands, i hold a knife
the one i'll use to take your life
i stab you deep, your blood runs red
you look with eyes only half dead
you run your hand upon my cheek
i feel your warmth start to leak
i start to cry and tell you this
was it worth that moment of bliss
you fall lifeless on the ground
soon the room is dreained of sound
i drop to my knees, i scream my pain
i think of you, my love i've slain
in this thought, regret forms bright
why did you have to cloud my sight
i loved you dearly, why did you not love me
now you've paid with life as your fee
i cannot take what i have done
why did today ever begun
the pain i have no more can i take
my eyes bleed tears, my body baked
i take the blade out of your gut
then put it in mine, just one cut
although im dying, i feel no pain
it feels my body is numbed by rain
i finally die, right by your side
your love in my body, does now not reside
with my last breath breathed, feeling relief
i died with love stolen, by the lover's thief
| On February 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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A tragic love story. Good work! Note to self: Beware of falling in love with this person. hahaha |
| On February 8th 2008 Halfpint9135 Said : | |
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This was...amazing to read. Not a lot of people can make murder look poetic, and even okay. Good job. |
| On February 4th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Great choice of words! |


