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haha. back in my "emo" days...

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lover'sthief.

Views (50) Anger Created on 2-4-08 Flag

arise the day, the morning sun

my life starts new, i have begun

i do what is right, and never fail

i go to you, my soul to tell

 

yet when i go, something is amist

i find you gave another your kiss

my heart beats fast, my hands they tremble

it feels my heart will disassemble

 

i gasp for breath, my head i shake

i cannot live, why did i wake

the tears i shed, turn to steam

i wish, i hope this is a dream

 

now from sorrow, do i wake

anger rises, my heart can't take

now all feelings have dissolved

yet one, anger, has evolved

 

you see me not, so i run away

i come back the, without delay

in my hands, i hold a knife

the one i'll use to take your life

 

i stab you deep, your blood runs red

you look with eyes only half dead

you run your hand upon my cheek

i feel your warmth start to leak

 

i start to cry and tell you this

was it worth that moment of bliss

you fall lifeless on the ground

soon the room is dreained of sound

 

i drop to my knees, i scream my pain

i think of you, my love i've slain

in this thought, regret forms bright

why did you have to cloud my sight

 

i loved you dearly, why did you not love me 

now you've paid with life as your fee

i cannot take what i have done

why did today ever begun

 

the pain i have no more can i take

my eyes bleed tears, my body baked

i take the blade out of your gut

then put it in mine, just one cut

 

although im dying, i feel no pain

it feels my body is numbed by rain

i finally die, right by your side

your love in my body, does now not reside

 

with my last breath breathed, feeling relief

i died with love stolen, by the lover's thief 

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On February 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth A tragic love story. Good work! Note to self: Beware of falling in love with this person. hahaha
On February 8th 2008 Halfpint9135 Said :
Halfpint9135 This was...amazing to read. Not a lot of people can make murder look poetic, and even okay. Good job.
On February 4th 2008 transgenic Said :
transgenic Great choice of words!