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there is always hope, isn't there?Rate this Poem
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image of night.
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Created on 1-24-08
The night, pitch black
nothing in front of me can I see
the cold air surrounds
the chill runs straight through me.
I stumble twice
the ground, colder than the air
small rocks scrape my hands.
Please answer my prayer.
I push myself up
not to my surprise
thunder rumbles
all through the skies.
Rain starts to fall
I shiver in my clothes
I look to the ground
"Why?!"
Who the hell knows?
Water falls from my face
aside from the rain.
Almost giving up
wanting to surrender the pain.
At the last moment
warmth touches my face
I look up to you
I'm caught in embrace.
Your fingers touch my skin
the rain begins to cease
light pierces my eyes.
So close to defeat.
You take my hand
Your warmth you pass on
Your eyes break through my soul
My loss of hope is gone.
*too bad this is only a poem and not reality =[
Please Login to post comments| On July 30th 2008 Daylynn0709 Said : | |
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Wow. very good. And very true sometimes, unfortunately. |
| On February 10th 2008 october1015 Said : | |
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I agree with June, make it your reality |
| On February 9th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Make it your reality! It's within your grasp, just reach for it. :) |
| On February 5th 2008 luvhim4ever12 Said : | |
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wow that was really good |
| On January 31st 2008 blahidyblah929 Said : | |
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very beautiful. |
| On January 30th 2008 Alexithymia90 Said : | |
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*hugs hugs* stay cool, awesome possum |
| On January 25th 2008 joemamafoo1 Said : | |
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thats a great poem. i thought there might be some hope left in the world until i read ur note at the bottom |
