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Created on 4-4-08
i don't know how to...
- think
- say
- feel
- or relieve the stress
after all my heart is torn into two x two
though I would be dead if that was true
but in emotional sense, it's the case of the blues
the dedication of this poem will be useless in time
because eventually it will be thing of the past
and as we know, not all of it was a blast
indeed I shall be pleased
with process of the making of history
united we stand
apart we may as well stumble and perhaps even fall
and two x two
my heart shall shed for you
poetry in the blues
Please Login to post comments| On June 9th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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I could almost hear this with a sax in the background. It's a great poem! Poetry in the blues. Haha. I love that you took that simple thought and again elaborated on the more intuitive side of it. You're really good with your words. I love this one too! |
| On May 15th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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very nice.... |
| On April 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i agreee with lady morb.....good job. as usual |
| On April 5th 2008 soccerbaybee Said : | |
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good job |
| On April 4th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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oh wow, i loved that! especially how you said that itd be a thing of the past. kinda seems weird once u think about it..whats goin on now will be the past later. but awesome job with this..i loooved it! |
| On April 4th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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I do apologize about the the format, format dislikes me on this site, thus not even the bullets would work. |
