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Whatever happen

Views (73) Fear Created on 3-21-08 Flag

~Whatever happen to family?
~Rarely to be seen?

~Whatever happen to our society?
~It's driving me to insanity

~Whatever happen to dreaming?
~Instead is replaced by reality

~Whatever happen to tears of joy
~Only to be replaced by tears of despairing

~Whatever happen to wisdom of years
~Only to be weakened by the surrounding peers

Whatever happen?

Whatever happen?

It's all starting to swallow
But can I fight the living hell
Even if it's burning my German blood
And trying to empty my soul
Brainwashing is trying to control me
And realization has aboard my mind
Of letting you all know
To
Be careful
Of who you are
And what you do
Because there is never a chance of turning back
Once you step through

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On May 29th 2008 offutt123 Said :
offutt123 very grabbing
On May 16th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia niceyyyy
On April 10th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
loved it
On March 29th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 i really like this
On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said :
Kymburleighx3 I can related to that greatly, I love the way you think about life. The way you go around it. I do feel though, that your mind argues with it'sself. Your understanding of the judgemental people is that equal to someone way beyond your years. I really am In love with this poem, you've got a way of making people open their eyes. Great job. Amazingg.
On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said :
Kymburleighx3 ~Whatever happen to family? ~Rarely to be seen?
On March 22nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i like it