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55 needles
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Created on 2-10-08
Slicing through my mind
Like 55 needles in an eye
Drowning in time
Consciousness has taken its flight
Suffocation hath bled me
Homicide has fed me
Burning from the outside
While dying on the inside
Like 55 needles in an eye
Vigorous shots of pain
Flashing through me
Like thunder and rain
Suffocation has tyrannized me
A violent homicide
55 needles in an eye
Please Login to post comments| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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This is very deep...love it a lot....... |
| On February 18th 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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love it!! |
| On February 17th 2008 xxxAngelicaxxx Said : | |
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very interesting but totally awesome |
| On February 12th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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I like it. I have never read anything like it. |
| On February 12th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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Wow! I love it! |
| On February 11th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I liked it a lot |
| On February 11th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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whoaaa! dude, that was intense! but great! really drew me in! awesome! these needles freakn hurt! >.< lol |
| On February 10th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Wow...I love it! Really intense.. |
| On February 10th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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i like this one! deffinately different from your others, but i reeeally like it. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Dark Chilling Different from your other writes. I've enjoyed them all! PEACE June |
