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Created on 2-2-08
Whenever your fuel is weakened
Ignite it with your stronghold strength
Burning at the tips, overshadowed by your sorrowful days
Faded was your glory till struck by grace
Burdened with stress
Failing at life
Drowning in lack of hope
Insomnia has strikened
And I just wanted to say
I'll shelter you till the end of time
Open are my arms
You'll be suprised
By every hug you give and receive
Helps another ones spirit rise
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 Liz912 Said : | |
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Quite agree, most uplifting. Hehe, well-written. Is your mom Ausjo??? Just wondering... |
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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yes very uplifting..... |
| On February 12th 2008 cloud132475860 Said : | |
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wow i never really realized how insightful you are we always tend to just joke around this is great!XD |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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So true! So much to ponder. |
| On February 4th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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very inspiring and powerful!!! GREAT |
| On February 4th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Me feels happiness now! |
| On February 3rd 2008 stew189 Said : | |
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Yeah so, like I said. More mature than most your age |
| On February 3rd 2008 i2am2hayley2PM Said : | |
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very inspiring! good job! |
| On February 2nd 2008 Poetnonsenses Said : | |
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I was drawn to the title, and I'm glad I wasn't disappointed! Love it. |
| On February 2nd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! As Thugnastay said, very uplifting. |
| On February 2nd 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On February 2nd 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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oooh! how nice! =] so sweet! =] |
| On February 2nd 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow...very uplifting...bravo! |
| On February 2nd 2008 HumanF17TH Said : | |
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aawww this is cute : P |
