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Keyless
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Created on 1-25-08
The key to my heart
Exploration igniting
Pulverizing soul
Weakened by control
Breaths shattered my bitter veins
Fluttering my heart
Repairing my hope
Merely kissed, traumatizing
Jostling with delight
Keyless to my heart
Quoting my life with I do
The man of my dreams
Please Login to post comments| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I'll bet this was fun to write. |
| On February 3rd 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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I especially love the second one. Awesome work! |
| On February 1st 2008 i2am2hayley2PM Said : | |
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i think this is really good!!! keep up the awesomeness! |
| On January 30th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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great combinations of haikus=] very nice! |
| On January 30th 2008 ausjo Said : | |
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Great style and feeling. So proud of my daughter! |
| On January 29th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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I liked it alot. Great choice of words and great structure. |
| On January 29th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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Short.... But really really good!!!!
I like this one... like a lot
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2 thumbs up! |
