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Sour sweet taste
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Created on 12-23-07
Slowly withdrawing
My fever for suicide
Insanity cries
Violating past
Twilight has passed and avast
Aghast at the fast
Lingering with haste
My taste increase within pace
Vivid drug of hate
Disdain, rather blank
Weakened was my days at taste
My sour sweet life
Please Login to post comments| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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So glad I stumbled in to have a peek. You have kept my hunger for more alive and I am about to eat them all up in one visit. :) |
| On January 6th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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Something about this one really really
connected with me... Great Great Job
I loved it |
| On January 6th 2008 comacozi101 Said : | |
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deep.... i love the way you wrote it,... |
| On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Pretty good, but I never have been a fan of the Haiku, but you do a good job with it. |
| On December 29th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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holy shit...this was like something a longtime hip hop veteran would say...it has a lyrical flow to it i mean..the second stanza i was saying to myself over and over...hotness. love it...good job B.P.C. |
| On December 29th 2007 jake189 Said : | |
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wow so nice... i really like the way it was rhyme... |
| On December 27th 2007 yeahimalli Said : | |
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Great poem..and by the way thanks for reading my poems..awesome work |
| On December 27th 2007 AshleyXxPiano Said : | |
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I love the style of the poem |
| On December 26th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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really awesome!! Sorry so late. I havent been on in awhile |
| On December 25th 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Definitely unique...Amazing word choice and emotion! |
| On December 24th 2007 sensitivityx7 Said : | |
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unique and deep......much emotions.....5 stars this poem should get |
| On December 23rd 2007 Wyldemiller Said : | |
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Jesus.... that is the most Unique flowing piece of poetry I have ever read. Very Nicely Done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
