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Becoming a one |
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Secrets of Beneath
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Created on 12-17-07
Where is my vision
True hope and prosperity
My value for life
Tumbling inside me
Losing the grip, perishing
Enlighten my soul
I have no control
Has it all died within me
Is it a shadow
Corrupting my skin
The truthful secret of life
Lies beneath my skin
Please Login to post comments| On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said : | |
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I can relate to this one very much so, as the other. It's like, you are tryingg, or even reaching out to others, and letting them know in a very subtle way that You're not telling them everything. I don't know, maybe it's just the way I think about it, or go with things. This is also a personal favorite. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This is the first haiku I read here that was more than just the 3 lines. I liked it. Now I want to try one. :) |
| On January 30th 2008 listen147 Said : | |
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wow. deep and beautiful! awesome! |
| On January 6th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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I really love your style
It's so unique
Great Word choice
I've often Times felt this way |
| On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very good. |
| On December 23rd 2007 donkaii Said : | |
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Wow its great!! Very emotional |
| On December 23rd 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Love it! Very emotional, I love your word choice! |
| On December 18th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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beatiful |
| On December 18th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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This is awesome! |
| On December 18th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow. BPC....this is great for ur first...What did I tell you huh? Marvelous. |
| On December 18th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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Ooah! Very catchy! I like! Great job! *thumbs up* |
