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Created on 12-2-07
Almost out
His anger
Is almost out
I'm
Ready
I'm ready for the
Blow..
I shall have no fear
Fear
Has weakened me
Thou
Will not defeat me
I
Shall
Defeat him
Power
Has powered throughout my pores
I'm ready
Ready..
Ready to strike back
Stretched back
Forward it goes
Slamming
Across my face
The blow has finally came
Anger has shown,
I am pissed
Forgiven, he is not
I will not let this go
I'm about to strike back
My hand, its fingers
Outstretched
Toward him
Reality held me
Back
The anger, he, all of it faded away
Only did I just
Realize,
That I'm back
In
My room
Playing a Nintendo 64
Game..
Please Login to post comments| On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA
that should be a joke!!!!! i could imagine the whole thing for awhile I thought you were going in the direction of domestic violence....but then boom! your playing a video game! i love it...it is just so good!!!!!! |
| On June 2nd 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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interesting i like your stuff
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| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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love it.... |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Unexpected ending. I was rooting for you to WHACK him. haha |
| On January 6th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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OMG
lol
I love this one
A twist lol
total twist
haha
I was engaged and interested
and ammused....
great job. |
| On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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I loved the way you manipulated the words to slow down and speed up the reader. Very Wicked, I really enjoyed that one |
| On December 9th 2007 MISSKAYTEExx Said : | |
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I like it. |
| On December 2nd 2007 kimmy626 Said : | |
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LOL. it's funny i was thinking about abuse. and it turned out to be a GAME! lol. you made a funny. there are some rough spots where you first begin and a little in the begginning. i'll let you figure out what they are yourself. |
| On December 2nd 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow.....a twist...i didnt see it comming...good job..i could see you cocking back ur arm ready to mangle his face...good job. |
