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and He's the desperate, She's the bitchRate this Poem
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To the Beginning |
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Unfortunate addiction
Okay ..
Thats great..
You have my attention..
Hurry the fuck up..
No time to waste..
Please get out of my face..
Of course I heard what you said..
I'm pretty damn busy..
I have a life..
I have a job..
I have my man..
What the fuck do you want with me?
Oh please..
Don't tell me..
You miss me!
We're over and done..
It's been like what..
5 years?
Why are you still in love with me..
What the fuck is wrong with you..
Do you need a slap in the face..
Boo hoo..
Wipe your tears..
No need to drool..
You hurt me..
I dumped you..
Life is miles better without you..
Don't give me that look..
And that sweet innocent speech..
Oh please, you're pathetic to me..
Quit winding up at my office door..
Begging for another chance with me..
Now get the fuck out..
Before I call security..
Stupid, pathetic, dweeb..
| On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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you told him!!!!!! the poor guy was probably in tears!!!! haha i loved this. you told the person off with such composure...you just put so much emotion into this poem it is wonderful...AWESOME!! =D |
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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ouchhhh,that's gotta hurt.Nice job. |
| On May 27th 2008 offutt123 Said : | |
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I wonder how many people have kicked this thought around in there head. You capture it nicely. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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ROFLMAO giggle Why does this seem to be laced with been there done that, for me. lol |
| On January 6th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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Poor dude can't take a hint huh?
lol
Like the way you just let it all pour
out
great job |
| On December 31st 2007 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Yeah after the first couple of weeks, that would be halfway understandable, but shit, after 5 years, he still ain't moved on, that can't be healthy. Very well done. Loved it! |
| On November 21st 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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lol...i feel bad for the dude.. :) |
| On November 20th 2007 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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That is awesome...you tell him |
| On November 15th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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LMAO. You go girl. Wouldn't it be great to say exactly what we think when we think it? |
| On November 14th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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holy shit....angy...aggressive...i almost feel bad for the fellow...he must really love her to be that annoying lol. great work...had me from line one. hooked. keep it up...this was better than my last 3 lol. |


