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Tucked away

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Pain

Created on 10-20-07

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Tucked away

Forever to be forgotten
Whispers of memories
scrawled away
On something so blank
Reaching out
Begging for the attention
As I silently felt it
The touch of it

Blew me away

So fragil and kind
With the
Fear of it withering
As I gradually looked upon it
Appeared the words seem to blur
Before my eyes
Tears slid down
As I read what was written
My hands vilonetly shake
Whereas my throat started to dry

For it was never meant to be read
By me or any of the others
Feeling the loss
The pain
And the agony
Once again

I dread the coming of tommorow
For the waking up
And not finding him

Along side my bed

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On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :

	wow.....this is really really really deep...I was intrigued and i felt like i was you.....it was just amazing!....love it...i absolutely love it!!!!!

On April 21st 2008 gonzo4201 Said :

	yes, I agree, heavy is the appropriate word for this one, I love the way you tell the story, but leave plenty to the imagination, wonderfully done!!

On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :

	This one has some weight to it. Thugnastay227 said it best. HEAVY!

On January 6th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :

	really deep i like it... Excellent job you've got an awesome talent!

On November 11th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :

	heavy.

On October 29th 2007 leigh4u Said :

	awesome

On October 23rd 2007 comacozi101 Said :

	lov it

On October 21st 2007 dyscordz Said :

	daim this is really good i loike it how u brought this out top stuff (this touched me)

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