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To the Beginning |
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Looking back
As I turned around
I saw where I came from
The people I left
And the ones that I never cared for
But the ones I do
Always remained at my
Side
Throughout these hard times
Looking back
I see how much I progressed
Becoming stronger in heart
And expanding further into the future
Seeing the ones
That later on died
I remember how they made me laugh
And also how they made me cry
Never will they be replaced
Always floating about in my heart
Rest in peace
Thou will never be forgotten
Looking down
At how I was taking life
Pushing through the sad moments
Entering back into the good
Remembering the thoughts I used to have
Of looking up to the rest
That I always used to idolize
Starting to smile
As they were only childish phases
I laughed at the past
And realized how rediculous
On how I acted
But then again
That was my ownself
I never changed
All I did was take a step through lifes fast lane
And entered through another phase
Someday in the future
I'll look back again
Once more will I smile and laugh
With tears in my eyes
About how I act
Only should I realize
That this is what you call
LIFE
| On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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life....i love how you portrayed it....it is so beautiful....it is really deep...LOVEIT!!! =D
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| On June 9th 2008 Lookin4TruLuv Said : | |
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You're very eloquent with your words. Making a simple thing as looking on life's changes and growths....and capturing the emotions in it. Wow! I really appreciate this one. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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hahahaha THIS MADE ME SMILE SO MUCH! :) I think about that often. How I look back on my past and laugh at how silly I was in my thinking and then think if perhaps 10 years from now I will do the same thing on today's thinking. hahaha Brilliant work. Really it is! |
| On January 4th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Very Deep, Loved it! |
| On November 11th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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you certainly know how to meld words together. |
| On October 12th 2007 BloodyTears15 Said : | |
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its really good i love it ^_^ |
| On October 10th 2007 DayLove Said : | |
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I like this, very nice write |
| On October 9th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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I love this one! So true, so inspirational... Amazing piece of work. |
| On October 2nd 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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luv it |
| On October 2nd 2007 Purpledcow Said : | |
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Beautiful! |


