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To the Beginning |
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Don't let go
Don't ever let go
Of what you hold
Let it flow
With the steady rythm of beat
Clap your hands
Tap your toes
Do anything
To keep your flow
Inside or out
Let it Absorb
Or let it release
Don't let yourself get beat
Strive for the win
Never struggle to fail
Hold your breath
As you plung in deep
Struggle to stay alive
As you fight the waves
That keep pushing you back
Help yourself
Make a breakthrough
Don't let yourself be held back
As you broke the waves
You never let go
Keeping a strive
To fight
For your
Life
For your own sake
Don't let your spirit die
That had once
Arosed
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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love love love it.......... |
| On February 16th 2008 lisaljb Said : | |
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ugh.. correction,supposed to be arose..sorry everyone. Wow that bugs me now. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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This one glides the reader on an effortless flow of inspiration. Beautiful! I'm a new fan. :) |
| On January 4th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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interesting piece, felt like I was really fighting waves, trying to stay afloat, loved it!! |
| On December 4th 2007 kimmy626 Said : | |
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wow.. lol i kept holding my breath while i was reading that for some odd reason. LOL. ^^ i like. keep it up. |
| On November 11th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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inspirational...no i feel like rocky or something...good stuff. uplifting. |
| On October 10th 2007 Skittlz7986 Said : | |
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that was crazy good |
| On October 10th 2007 metzymutzy Said : | |
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Wow. This is really, really good! =] |
| On October 9th 2007 akrovaz Said : | |
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This poem has such an unusual rhythm and flow to it: Great job!! |
| On October 2nd 2007 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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loved this one =] |
| On September 30th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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love it |
| On September 28th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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kool job :) |
| On September 28th 2007 Purpledcow Said : | |
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Wow, very inspirational! |
| On September 28th 2007 rebeccaisett Said : | |
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LOVE IT |


