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Don't let go

Views (171) Other Created on 9-28-07 Flag

Don't ever let go

Of what you hold

Let it flow

With the steady rythm of beat

Clap your hands

Tap your toes

Do anything

To keep your flow

Inside or out

Let it Absorb

Or let it release

Don't let yourself get beat

Strive for the win

Never struggle to fail

Hold your breath

As you plung in deep

Struggle to stay alive

As you fight the waves

That keep pushing you back

Help yourself

Make a breakthrough

Don't let yourself be held back

As you broke the waves

You never let go

Keeping a strive

To fight

For your

Life

For your own sake

Don't let your spirit die

That had once

Arosed

 

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On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia love love love it..........
On February 16th 2008 lisaljb Said :
lisaljb ugh.. correction,supposed to be arose..sorry everyone. Wow that bugs me now.
On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth This one glides the reader on an effortless flow of inspiration. Beautiful! I'm a new fan. :)
On January 4th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 interesting piece, felt like I was really fighting waves, trying to stay afloat, loved it!!
On December 4th 2007 kimmy626 Said :
kimmy626 wow.. lol i kept holding my breath while i was reading that for some odd reason. LOL. ^^ i like. keep it up.
On November 11th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 inspirational...no i feel like rocky or something...good stuff. uplifting.
On October 10th 2007 Skittlz7986 Said :
Skittlz7986 that was crazy good
On October 10th 2007 metzymutzy Said :
metzymutzy Wow. This is really, really good! =]
On October 9th 2007 akrovaz Said :
akrovaz This poem has such an unusual rhythm and flow to it: Great job!!
On October 2nd 2007 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 loved this one =]
On September 30th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 love it
On September 28th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 kool job :)
On September 28th 2007 Purpledcow Said :
Purpledcow Wow, very inspirational!
On September 28th 2007 rebeccaisett Said :
rebeccaisett LOVE IT