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Who will I become?

Views (143) Other Created on 9-22-07 Flag

Where do I stand

Where do I fall

Where am I placed

In this drama, hope, and pain

Am I stuck in the middle

Or on the edge of the world

With nothing left

But faith in my soul

Who will I become

Another face in the crowd

Or someone that stands out

Am I on top of the game

Or am I losing the strength

That keeps me going

Everday

Who will I become

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On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia I love this one the best.......you have great great poems
On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said :
Kymburleighx3 I ask myself these questions everyday. I try to become my own person. I get these people who hold me back though, suchas parents, or friends trying to be just like me. It kinda sickens me, knowning that were not aloud to be us, or possibly even grow up sometimes. It's like being chained down, with no way of getting loose.
On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth Looks to me like you've become an ispiration to others to think about things such as this. :)
On January 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Wonderful Question, But, when will that question truly be answered, until you are dead, you possess the ability to become anything you want to be, or even something you would never wish to be
On January 16th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said :
MyHeartIsAPOW I like it! it reminds me of the uncertainies of high school...great job... can you check out some of my poems for me?
On December 30th 2007 xxKatieKaresxx Said :
xxKatieKaresxx i love it! so true!
On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 ur poems...i cant think of an adequate way ato describe them. captivating maybe? u get the readers attention from the start and keep them in the world u created for the whole story. consistantly too i might add.
On September 30th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 I ask this question alot, it makes people think more about their own lives - Very nice
On September 28th 2007 pru1989 Said :
pru1989 you become who ever you want to become we have the strength in ourselfs to make it happpen
On September 25th 2007 Purpledcow Said :
Purpledcow Good question, something most of have asked ourselves.