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My Poems
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To the Beginning |
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Becoming a one |
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Wherever you go |
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Who is that man |
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Who will I become? |
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Don't let go |
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Looking back |
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Killer at heart |
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Tucked away |
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Unfortunate addiction |
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Reality Show |
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Secrets of Beneath |
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Sour sweet taste |
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Keyless |
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Free Hugs |
Who will I become?
Where do I stand
Where do I fall
Where am I placed
In this drama, hope, and pain
Am I stuck in the middle
Or on the edge of the world
With nothing left
But faith in my soul
Who will I become
Another face in the crowd
Or someone that stands out
Am I on top of the game
Or am I losing the strength
That keeps me going
Everday
Who will I become
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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I love this one the best.......you have great great poems |
| On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said : | |
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I ask myself these questions everyday. I try to become my own person. I get these people who hold me back though, suchas parents, or friends trying to be just like me. It kinda sickens me, knowning that were not aloud to be us, or possibly even grow up sometimes. It's like being chained down, with no way of getting loose. |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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Looks to me like you've become an ispiration to others to think about things such as this. :) |
| On January 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Wonderful Question, But, when will that question truly be answered, until you are dead, you possess the ability to become anything you want to be, or even something you would never wish to be |
| On January 16th 2008 MyHeartIsAPOW Said : | |
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I like it! it reminds me of the uncertainies of high school...great job... can you check out some of my poems for me? |
| On December 30th 2007 xxKatieKaresxx Said : | |
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i love it! so true! |
| On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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ur poems...i cant think of an adequate way ato describe them. captivating maybe? u get the readers attention from the start and keep them in the world u created for the whole story. consistantly too i might add. |
| On September 30th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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I ask this question alot, it makes people think more about their own lives - Very nice |
| On September 28th 2007 pru1989 Said : | |
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you become who ever you want to become we have the strength in ourselfs to make it happpen |
| On September 25th 2007 Purpledcow Said : | |
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Good question, something most of have asked ourselves. |


