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To the Beginning
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Created on 7-29-07
The sky is high
The ground is low
Someday I wish to fly
Up in the sky
Feeling the rush of the wind
And the sudden turn of darkness
I see no legs
And I see no toes
My stomach is gone
But there is lightness ahead
I felt my spirit began to rise
High up in sky I fly
Suddenly through the Gates of Heaven
And stepping through a new world to Christ
I realize right then that I died
The ground is low
Someday I wish to fly
Up in the sky
Feeling the rush of the wind
And the sudden turn of darkness
I see no legs
And I see no toes
My stomach is gone
But there is lightness ahead
I felt my spirit began to rise
High up in sky I fly
Suddenly through the Gates of Heaven
And stepping through a new world to Christ
I realize right then that I died
Please Login to post comments| On July 7th 2008 vernathome Said : | |
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again your art impressed me |
| On June 28th 2008 Angel2k11 Said : | |
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oh that would be the perfect way to die.....this poem made me smile!!! =] i loved it!! you are one awesome writer!!!! |
| On June 20th 2008 oliveisup Said : | |
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OOO.. i really like this! =) |
| On March 23rd 2008 Kymburleighx3 Said : | |
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amazing imagery, I really saw it. |
| On February 16th 2008 Ostupid1 Said : | |
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very good, boy you have a lot of comments!!! and point and poems... Your good.
Really! |
| On February 10th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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What a blissful ride that was! I LOVED IT! |
| On November 12th 2007 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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AWWWWW yet again...good job. |
| On October 4th 2007 kgrf101 Said : | |
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Wonderful and u have a scence of style! |
| On September 30th 2007 comacozi101 Said : | |
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i like this, its unique but really good |
| On September 7th 2007 Skittlz7986 Said : | |
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Its incredible. It just kind o suddenly hits you at the end. |
| On August 25th 2007 HRHHermione Said : | |
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I hope that's what it will feel like! Very nice |
| On August 25th 2007 massofwebs Said : | |
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kwl haha kinda funny then again i hav a weird sence of humour |
| On August 2nd 2007 inv8er Said : | |
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i love it |
| On August 1st 2007 Biggun221 Said : | |
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that was a bit of a twist. but still very good |
| On July 31st 2007 Hollehmariee Said : | |
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bit of a twist there =O |
