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"X"
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Created on 9-17-07
X: THE FEELING OF HEAVEN,
THE ONE REASON TO FORGET,
It'S THE DRUG THAT MAKES ME FEEL ALIVE
KNOWING THAT THIS SENSATION MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD INSIDE,
MY ONE DRUG THAT MAKES A DIFFERENCE,
MY TRUE LOVE OF FEELING EROTIC,
MIX EMOTION OF THIS PERFECT DRUG MIXING AROUND MY BODY,
EVERY TOUCH MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD INSIDE
IT MAKES THIS WORLD DISAPPEAR,
LETTING ME FORGET WHAT'S AROUND ME,
JUST TAKING ONE PILL TAKES ME TO A WORLD OF SECRETS KNOWING
WHAT PEOPLE ARE SAYING WITHOUT THEM KNOWING -
THIS HAS BECOME A SLOW MOTION REACTION OF THE MOST PERFECT ATTRACTION,
THIS SLOW MOTION REACTION HAS TAKEN ME TO A ROOM WITH ONE PERSON JUST TOUCHING MY BODY,
GRABBING HER HAND FEELING ON MY LIPS KNOWING THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING
SO STOP AND ACT UPON THE PILL AND LET ME FEEL WHAT I GOTTA FEEL,
X: THE ONLY TRUE SENSATION THAT LETS ME BREATHE KNOWING THAT MY HEARt BEAT GOES THROUGH LIKE SPEED,
It'S LIKE AN OUT OF CONTROL FEELING THAT TAKES OVER my MIND
WHILE I'M LOSING THE FEELING OF LIFE,
LETTING MY EMOTION DROWN SO DEEP INTO THE SEA SEARCHING FOR WATER FEELING THIRSTY INSIDE
i TRY TO FIND MY WAY BACK WITHOUT LOSING MY MIND,
BUT IT HAS COME TO AN END
I'M SITTING NEXT TO A POOL OF BLOOD
NOT KNOWING WHERE It'S COMING FROM,
SUDDENLY I'M NEXT TO MY OWN BODY
LOOKING TO SEE WHAT HAS BECOME OF ME,
X: THE ONE TRUE FEELING OF DEATH
AND I CHOSE THAT NOT TO BE MY DESTINY.
By,
Isbel Ramon
THE ONE REASON TO FORGET,
It'S THE DRUG THAT MAKES ME FEEL ALIVE
KNOWING THAT THIS SENSATION MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD INSIDE,
MY ONE DRUG THAT MAKES A DIFFERENCE,
MY TRUE LOVE OF FEELING EROTIC,
MIX EMOTION OF THIS PERFECT DRUG MIXING AROUND MY BODY,
EVERY TOUCH MAKES ME FEEL SO GOOD INSIDE
IT MAKES THIS WORLD DISAPPEAR,
LETTING ME FORGET WHAT'S AROUND ME,
JUST TAKING ONE PILL TAKES ME TO A WORLD OF SECRETS KNOWING
WHAT PEOPLE ARE SAYING WITHOUT THEM KNOWING -
THIS HAS BECOME A SLOW MOTION REACTION OF THE MOST PERFECT ATTRACTION,
THIS SLOW MOTION REACTION HAS TAKEN ME TO A ROOM WITH ONE PERSON JUST TOUCHING MY BODY,
GRABBING HER HAND FEELING ON MY LIPS KNOWING THAT I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING
SO STOP AND ACT UPON THE PILL AND LET ME FEEL WHAT I GOTTA FEEL,
X: THE ONLY TRUE SENSATION THAT LETS ME BREATHE KNOWING THAT MY HEARt BEAT GOES THROUGH LIKE SPEED,
It'S LIKE AN OUT OF CONTROL FEELING THAT TAKES OVER my MIND
WHILE I'M LOSING THE FEELING OF LIFE,
LETTING MY EMOTION DROWN SO DEEP INTO THE SEA SEARCHING FOR WATER FEELING THIRSTY INSIDE
i TRY TO FIND MY WAY BACK WITHOUT LOSING MY MIND,
BUT IT HAS COME TO AN END
I'M SITTING NEXT TO A POOL OF BLOOD
NOT KNOWING WHERE It'S COMING FROM,
SUDDENLY I'M NEXT TO MY OWN BODY
LOOKING TO SEE WHAT HAS BECOME OF ME,
X: THE ONE TRUE FEELING OF DEATH
AND I CHOSE THAT NOT TO BE MY DESTINY.
By,
Isbel Ramon
Please Login to post comments| On January 11th 2008 kocher35 Said : | |
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crazy good! |
| On September 19th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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wow-that was an intense piece..I love the ending though-the best choice!! |
