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lilemoannie

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20/02/08

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names

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Created on 2-20-08

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you call me names

you ask all these questions

have you any idea just how much

this hurts

i have no answers

for your questions

and you dont seem to notice

your making me worse

cant you see i'm screaming

for all of this to end

and searching for a world

where i can be me

i'm looking and looking

round each and every bend

but i cant find a place

where my soul can be free

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On April 25th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	I like it. It's flowy~ and gets the message across. Nice job~

On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :

	It's a bit shaky, but other than that it's amazing work. You told a story through it. I like it. though honestly it doesn't have to make sense to a reader. as long as it makes sense to you and means something to you.

On February 20th 2008 lilemoannie Said :

	hey evri1 please be honest about my work i realli wanna no wat ppl think thanks