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lilemoannie

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18/02/08

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i'm sorry

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Created on 2-20-08

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i went away for a while

oh god

how i missed your smile

and the way you always tell me

i am yours and you are mine

you made me feel magic

so truly special

but what i've done is awful

i feel so cold and trajic

i've betrayed you

my darling

for reasons i do not know

but i love you my darling

please do not go

i long to see you again

just to touch

your soft lips

or feel your strong hands

resting on my hips

oh i wish we could talk

one last time

just to hear you say again

i am yours

and you are mine

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On April 26th 2008 lilemoannie Said :

	thank you for all the great comments it means alot to me

On February 20th 2008 pjjustin Said :

	i really think you have some real talent it believable and true which makes it all the better!

On February 20th 2008 AngelOfNight47 Said :

	that's amazing. i agree with pikkakard. very sad. very well written. and you got the message across well.

On February 20th 2008 Pikkakard Said :

	Amazing poem. Very sad, and I can sense that the regret is real, but it's very well written.

On February 20th 2008 lilemoannie Said :

	hey evri1 please be perfectly honest about my work i want to know wat yuuh realli think kk thank yuuh