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Written the day my dreams died, today.Rate this Poem
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Dreaming Ends |
Dreaming Ends
DREAMING ENDS
Was I meant to live this way,
Living life like it was yesterday,
Running through the hours…
Day after day… aging away my face…
But when I close my eyes,
I picture the world is with me,
And when I close my mind,
It’s like a painting I can see…
But I know my world will never be…
When did pretending become a sin,
Why has my soul made it so hard…
To let the good thoughts in,
Inside my heart is breaking… for today
Dreaming ends…
Do I cry out,
Do I scream,
Do I awaken from this dream?
Do I surrender,
Do I give in,
Do I forgive them in the end?
My questions keep on pounding,
With the beat of my breaking heart…
Since when did living dreams have to be so hard?
But now the truth is clear… and though the world may never care,
My dreaming ends here…. and my soul… becomes a living nightmare.
| On July 13th 2007 fgggfx Said: |
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| wow amazing poem,i luv it ecspecailly the last line. great job |
| On July 13th 2007 Vestque Said: |
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| Wow, this is really good! I would vote for it twice if I could :P |
| On May 30th 2007 jewells716 Said: |
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| oh wow.... i'm speechless.... almost breathless... that's just amazing. |
| On April 18th 2007 cheersquad07 Said: |
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| wow this explains really wat i am going through right now im glad i am not the only one |
| On April 18th 2007 blutess Said: |
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| very good. and i understand what your writing in this poem. another awsome poem. |
| On April 18th 2007 bigbabii Said: |
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| This is really good. I like the way you conveyed your feelings. |
| On April 18th 2007 vampirinsic Said: |
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| omg, this is probably the best poem out of all ur poems. and ur poems are really awsome. what happened? is it something i can help with. im serious though, this is REALLY good. |


