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was leaving my dad, felt sad in the carRate this Poem
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Created:
04/04 2007
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249
Category:
Pain
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kiss me as i go
kiss me as i go
leaving all regrets
put my face into your hands
to make your mind remember before it forgets
please don't leave after im gone
don't make me take that pain too
its hard enough as it is
now that im leaving you
i need you to be here when i get back
so i know theres hope still left to have
but if your gone, and im alone
who will be there to make me laugh
who in the world will ask for my hand
who will it be, that i reply yes
even now i dream of you more
even though i should think of you less
What am i to do with all this worry
for i will never really know
if you will still be here when i get back
after you kiss me when i go
| On April 27th 2007 BabyImEmo Said: |
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| i love it
very nice =] |
| On April 27th 2007 caseydee62 Said: |
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| i love it... |
| On April 22nd 2007 jewells716 Said: |
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| i love this. it's so deep. you are an awesome poet. i feel the same way with my dad. |
| On April 18th 2007 chickenbroth Said: |
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| wow, this is so crazy because Tim my bf(purplecouch)moved away a few months ago, and it kinda crushed me for a while. This is a fantastic poem and true art is that which one can relate to. Great job! |
| On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said: |
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| Wow, that's deep. But it totally ROX, great rhyming too |
| On April 8th 2007 vampirinsic Said: |
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| that is so sweet, i miss my dad a lot too. |
| On April 4th 2007 isdrowning Said: |
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| it's deep in it's own way. i have a soft spot for paternal poems. i like the rhyme scheme. |


