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was leaving my dad, felt sad in the car

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Created: 04/04 2007
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Category: Pain

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kiss me as i go

kiss me as i go

leaving all regrets

put my face into your hands

to make your mind remember before it forgets

please don't leave after im gone

don't make me take that pain too

its hard enough as it is

now that im leaving you

i need you to be here when i get back

so i know theres hope still left to have

but if your gone, and im alone

who will be there to make me laugh

who in the world will ask for my hand

who will it be, that i reply yes

even now i dream of you more

even though i should think of you less

What am i to do with all this worry

for i will never really know

if you will still be here when i get back

after you kiss me when i go

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On April 27th 2007 BabyImEmo Said: 
BabyImEmo i love it very nice =]
On April 27th 2007 caseydee62 Said: 
caseydee62 i love it...
On April 22nd 2007 jewells716 Said: 
jewells716 i love this. it's so deep. you are an awesome poet. i feel the same way with my dad.
On April 18th 2007 chickenbroth Said: 
chickenbroth wow, this is so crazy because Tim my bf(purplecouch)moved away a few months ago, and it kinda crushed me for a while. This is a fantastic poem and true art is that which one can relate to. Great job!
On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said: 
milolover36 Wow, that's deep. But it totally ROX, great rhyming too
On April 8th 2007 vampirinsic Said: 
vampirinsic that is so sweet, i miss my dad a lot too.
On April 4th 2007 isdrowning Said: 
isdrowning it's deep in it's own way. i have a soft spot for paternal poems. i like the rhyme scheme.