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a friend backstabbed me

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Created: 04/04 2007
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Category: Anger

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around the town

Boys and girls around the town

desire and passion in the place

but will i find love here of all places

on such a painful gruesome face

formed by angels distorted by demons

a hellish ordeal for me to go through

but now after hurting and insulting your feelings

i realize this beauty that is truly you

why did i flinch at the first glance

of the you you wished had been hidden

i shouldn't have torn at your mask like that

i should have left it there to cover the sin, but didn't

i ask for forgivness a hundred times now

for having seen the true you that lies beneath

because the beauty i spoke of before

is nothing but cleverness and your skill with deciept

yes it is true, your face may be beautiful

your body and form seemingly cut out of stone

but the thing you stilll seem unable to understand

is that you are hideous to me for the personality shown

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On April 8th 2007 vampirinsic Said: 
vampirinsic jesus christ, this is an awsome poem, it takes u a little bit to understand, but once u do it rox ass.
On April 4th 2007 isdrowning Said: 
isdrowning once again, grammatical errors, but it's fine. your meanings push past the words. this is my favorite poem of the two-faced.
On April 4th 2007 blutess Said: 
blutess u know, in a way i understand this. now i'm just having trouble figuring out y i understand it. should be interesting.lol. i really like the way u fraze the words though. its cool.