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my familt is a bunch of sinnersRate this Poem
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Created:
04/04 2007
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556
Category:
Anger
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Dreaming Ends |
hell bound
time has past for centuries
and yet i still remain
why did god choose me for this
an eternity of life with pain
its killing me as i speak
between these gasps for breath
it stabs deep into the heart
and takes from me all i have left
the pain you see upon my face
is something you will never know
its the dream i have of the end of the world
when i go to hell and my family goes
Please Login to post comments| On April 27th 2007 caseydee62 Said: |
| i love it!!! speechless!!!! |
| On April 14th 2007 milolover36 Said: |
| I'm loven it!!! |
| On April 12th 2007 sammyannolivel Said: |
| really good. |
| On April 8th 2007 vampirinsic Said: |
| I LOVE THIS!!!! i love how i can relate 2 it so much. good job |
| On April 4th 2007 isdrowning Said: |
| yeah the second to last line doesn't really fit great. interesting concept i'll admit. |
| On April 4th 2007 blutess Said: |
| guess not everyone can have that happy ever after kind of family,huh? |
| On April 4th 2007 imsyko227 Said: |
| wow. i guess i'll c u there when i go too. |
| On April 4th 2007 asdgkludtiopya Said: |
| What the ****? |
| On April 4th 2007 Janellekinsey Said: |
| I agree with the last personit sounds rly good but then the last bit stops ryhmin as if you dint put much effort into it. Butoverall i like it |
| On April 4th 2007 comlpicated16 Said: |
| the starting of its gd...but the end was a little bit hard to understand...I liked it though... |
