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I wrote this in 9th grade.Rate this Poem
My Poems
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What Is Love |
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I Am Who I Am |
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Nobody Knows |
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What Do You Do |
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Here I Am |
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Familure Eyes |
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Strong |
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Sick |
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I Love You |
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So Many Words |
I Am Who I Am
I am who I am
No less because of race, gender, or sexuality
I am who I am
No more because of race, gender, or sexuality
I am who I am
No less because of height or weight
I am who I am
Who I am is me
I am smart
I am fun
I am talented
But most of all
I am who I am
And who I am
Is me
| On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said : | |
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There is nothing fancy done here. It's dazzling because it's so direct, so simple, and so to the point. The style drives forward with steamroller mentality. So yea, it's the attitude that does it for me.
Commercial Possibilities: Advertising a very edgy product, perhaps? Definitely one aimed at a 14-21 year old demographic. |
| On September 8th 2007 maryannsnyder Said : | |
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the ending kicked ass |
| On September 2nd 2007 ultimatebadger Said : | |
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nice babe that is realy well done |
| On September 1st 2007 transgenic Said : | |
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Great work, I love it! |
| On September 1st 2007 Jizzlenator Said : | |
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Love the ending. |


