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a poem i wrote in like 8th or 9th gradeRate this Poem
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What Is Love
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Created on 9-1-07
I lie here next to you and wonder
Why do people fall in love
And what exactly is love
Everybody wants it, but what exactly is it
Then I look into your eyes and realize
Love is more than a feeling
Love is actions, words, thoughts
Looking into someones eyes all day
But can love really have a meaning
Then it comes to me
Of course it can
Saying love is actions, words, thoughts
Spending time with people you care about
Feeling safe around that certain person
Wanting to spend the rest of your life with them
That is the meaning of love
And I love you
Please Login to post comments| On September 8th 2007 maryannsnyder Said : | |
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it was great "^_^" |
| On September 8th 2007 danielftlew Said : | |
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It's sweet, and from the heart. And that's what really matters in a love poem anyway. Format be damned. Rhyme be damned. If the person for whom the poem is intended gets the point, then the words have served their intended point. |
| On September 2nd 2007 ultimatebadger Said : | |
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awwww babe I love you |
| On September 1st 2007 leeshaforeverr Said : | |
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no, i dont think so, i think its perfect the way it is =] thanks for the feedback though =] |
| On September 1st 2007 Jizzlenator Said : | |
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It's good, but I'm not very fond of the format. You should try breaking it up into three or four stanzas. |
