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Sorrow's Path

Views (133) Pain Created on 3-14-07 Flag

What have I done to end up here?

What have I done to envoke this wrath?

She is upset and angry, down her cheek rolls a tear.

The sign reads; sorrow’s path.

The love we had

Now is no more.

I feel so sad

As I close the door.

Two lives I’ve wrecked,

Not just one.

That was the effect,

The damage cannot be undone.

What was I thinking?

Why did I cheat?

Now she is alone, crying.

And I retreat.

Things between us are definitely through.

We must move on and try to forget.

We must start over, our lives brand new.

This pain we feel we cannot let

Control our lives the way it hath.

We must get off this lonely road.

This lonely raod called sorrow’s path.

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On February 27th 2008 Sashel Said :
Sashel Sorry that submitted so many times, my internet wasn't loading. . .heh
On February 27th 2008 Sashel Said :
Sashel You asked me to read your stuff a really long time ago. I haven't gotten on here forever. . .so I thought I would finally do it. I love this poem, you definitely have just enough rhyming thrown in there. It flows beautifully too!
On February 27th 2008 Sashel Said :
Sashel You asked me to read your stuff a really long time ago. I haven't gotten on here forever. . .so I thought I would finally do it. I love this poem, you definitely have just enough rhyming thrown in there. It flows beautifully too!
On February 27th 2008 Sashel Said :
Sashel You asked me to read your stuff a really long time ago. I haven't gotten on here forever. . .so I thought I would finally do it. I love this poem, you definitely have just enough rhyming thrown in there. It flows beautifully too!
On June 24th 2007 CassiixBabiixJ Said :
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awwwwww. i like it... its sad tho... =[
On June 22nd 2007 jennycorier Said :
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i am going through this right now...you really touched me. thank you :-)
On June 22nd 2007 jessiejewel Said :
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nice word play!
On June 22nd 2007 amanda710faith Said :
amanda710faith great poem i have one that is kinda like it only the happier side of it its called forgiven. im sure you'd understand if u read it. very nice work though =D
On April 15th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx Amazing poem! i luv it
On March 23rd 2007 litchfiled Said :
litchfiled good poem... i like it...guys who can write like this are amazing...:) keep it up -Malinda
On March 21st 2007 tonia888 Said :
tonia888 i really like this!!
On March 17th 2007 Saira78 Said :
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I can relate
On March 17th 2007 cchsbandaddict Said :
cchsbandaddict This is an amazing poem..i can really relate..keep on writing!
On March 16th 2007 angelsong1 Said :
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Pure and heartfelt!
On March 15th 2007 IrisMoon Said :
IrisMoon Good poem...it reminded me of this song called Pure Heart in some game...I think FF something. Great job though!
On March 15th 2007 LTG50 Said :
LTG50 i love it!
On March 15th 2007 natajsha715 Said :
natajsha715 Good Stuff!!!!