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Brainfreeze!!! |
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WWII |
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Seasons |
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UNC Rocks! |
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The loneliest man alive... |
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ABC |
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My awesome goal |
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Be my star...* |
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Four key Elements |
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My brother! ha ha |
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A Christmas to Remember |
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Little Creek. |
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Howard |
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Where I'm From |
Howard
Once there was a man,
Howard was his name,
He was forced to do many things,
But he did not complain.
He was sent across the ocean,
Along with many others,
And even though they were different,
They were all considered brothers.
In a country they were stationed,
Where life was very queer,
And for the citizens living there,
The new arrivals brought fear.
They were loaded with machine guns,
And protected head-to-toe,
On street corners they were there,
Around the town their jeeps would go.
Gunshots were often heard,
Screams and shots were common too,
But they were only doing,
What they were told to do.
For they would think about their families,
Back at home, every day,
And even though they longed for them,
Here they had to stay.
With violence 'round every corner,
And eyes filled with despair,
The only thing they wanted,
Was their loved-ones at home to care.
They wrote lots of letters,
Saying what they had observed,
And hoped that back at home,
The letters would be preserved.
So that if they never came back,
To their familes and friends,
At least they would have memories,
Of what their country meant to them.
| On August 9th 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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Excellent imagery... The format is a bit common but good use of it.
I have a poem kinda like it called 'death's benefactor: a soldier's story'...but it's not about a particular war...just in general. |
| On August 7th 2008 lavenderloveu Said : | |
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aww thnx 4 ur comments. it means alot. i dont wanna seem selfish, but it would be great if you guys could tell some of your friends about it. i dont care about the points i get...i just want people to be aware of this. thank you soooo much! :] |
| On August 6th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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wow! that was... no, IS an ammazeing poem, its increadible |
| On August 5th 2008 joan015 Said : | |
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Wow! that was good. i almostt cried. |
| On July 28th 2008 teddy529 Said : | |
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This is really good! |
| On July 24th 2008 MomoHoshi456 Said : | |
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this actually makes me cry! |
| On July 23rd 2008 CelestialAeon Said : | |
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Wow mad props i dunno what to say its hard to imagine what kind of life thats like death is a reality thats far too real and for those kind of people who walks by deaths door day by day to protect those they love, well i think there could be no greater honor than that |


