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this is one of my band's songs.Rate this Poem
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Sins, deeds, truths, lies and rushes now are burning. Pink eye, exhaustion and headaches occuring. Over and over again but I'm still not learning.
At all.
spitting out, winding down off the time machine. I reflect on my past lived life and notice I've not managed to achieve anything.
At all. The costs of my desired destiny, it's becoming a bit much for me. Give me a shot of amphetamine. again.
Want to play truth or dare? I dare you to fucking try. Or stimulate your mind.
I love you, you want me. IT'S ALL JUST A LIE. Blood from a swan, tears of a crocodile.
I watch you as you turn up your pathetic smile. Sick little girl. How could you smile? You've just crushed my heart with your obvious denial. You're lies taste like honey but your truths are too vile. Sad little girl. I dare you, another smile.
Walking out, back tracking out of the time machine. This is me finally coming clean. This is my moment of clearity telling me I won't amount up to anything, at all..
at all.
| On August 15th 2008 lardpiles Said : | |
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this is actually not the fool song. it's like..half of it. |
| On July 21st 2008 lardpiles Said : | |
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it's: when something is too dark for something so beautiful. |
| On July 21st 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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uhm ... btw ... my friend was wondering if blood from a swan meant something because tears of a crocodile is a saying ... lol |
| On July 21st 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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wow ... "you're lies taste like honey?!" wow ... i loooooove that |
| On July 10th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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ohhhhh so you finally decided to show everyone who you are when you're mad?? good, i like it. |
| On July 8th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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This is fabulous, so much emotion. I'd love to hear it. |
| On July 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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oh very nice... love it |
| On July 4th 2008 chayeah22 Said : | |
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It's nice. I like it. |
| On July 4th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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nice |
| On July 3rd 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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I'd like to hear it as well. Good job. |
| On July 3rd 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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Oh... I want to hear it. I like. |
| On July 3rd 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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nice :) |


