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She Wants to Change the World
Us both sitting all alone in a yard full of green grass
talking stories and blowing bubbles all so peacefully
Her name is Gracey and she's beautiful.
Every smile she makes, makes me feel tingly inside
I want to hold her close, I want her to be mine
But I could never dare, circumstances are too shifted
Her name is Gracey and she sings beneath her breath.
Time moves slower when she's around
I can't help but watch her in amazement
She's connected with the earth, heavily opinionated
she's a dreamer, a seeker, one of those true believers.
Her name is Gracey and she wants to change the world.
We lay together in the grass deciphering the clouds
Every word she says to me is poetry.
How I long to kiss her feircely and have her be with me
But she's got a simple envelope of complications
I run my hands through her gentle, stringy hair
Her name is Gracey and she closes her eyes at the universe
Sereal and serene, in a daze, in amazement
I listen to the sound of her silky voice, smooth with the wind
I'm on another planet with you truely, where I'll stay.
I don't want to come down to earth, back to pain.
There are no questions only answers around her,
wisdom beyond any measurement, she enlightens withher bright spirit.
Sucking me in until I don't want to come out
Her name is Gracey and she's like no one I've ever met
| On June 28th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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I'm sorry, but I had to comment again. I just really like this poem. 8) |
| On June 17th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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ok this is amazing one of my favorties ever. i lovee it |
| On June 8th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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This one's my favorite of yours, prolly cuz im a sucker for repetition I love how you put a 'her name is gracey...' at the end of each of your stanzas. |
| On June 7th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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ohhh thats so sweet (: love it |
| On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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really cool |
| On June 1st 2008 toriayla16 Said : | |
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Gracey wants to change the world- i know how she feels! i absolutely love this! great job! |
| On June 1st 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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wow ... this is .... just wow lol ... my new favorite |
| On June 1st 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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wow, this is sweet. It is really cool too, I like the whole "Her name is Gracey and she wants to change the world" thing. |


