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Nothing but Hell
all this time i was busy blaming you
but now im starting to blame myself
maybe if i would've stayed with you
instead of going with my friends
maybe you would be here.
you ran away
he gave you praise
he loved you
all the things i didn't give you, he gave
i saw the signs
read between all the lines
i could've stopped it
if i would've only took the time
all this time i've been busy blaming it all on you
when the answer's been me all along
maybe if i would've listened to every word that you said
i wouldn't be here, thinking over our last conversation in my head
i was my fault
and that is all
my consequences
were simply for us to fall
i remember when you asked me what i wanted
and i told you that i wanted you off my back
i remember when you told me that i love you
and i waited a few days before i answered you back
i remember when you asked me how i was
i told you that i would've been better if you got off your ass
every frown
every curse
every fight
it makes this worse
i regret the things that i once said to you
every eyeroll
every sigh
everytime i didn't try
it just makes this worse
it just makes it all worse
all this time i was busy blaming you
but now im starting to blame myself
I should've told you just how much I love the things that you do
you're on my mind
all the time
you're always on my mine
twenty-four seven
My life used to be heaven
but without you it's been
Nothing but hell.
| On June 8th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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i know the feeling. |
| On June 2nd 2008 chickp96 Said : | |
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Whoa..... that is really..... wow.... I can't explain it... |
| On June 1st 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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I really like it..shows a lot of emotion =] |
| On June 1st 2008 lardpiles Said : | |
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ummm i think i'll just stick to poems for right now...but thanx, it's input. |
| On June 1st 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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amaaaaazing ^^ ... it would make a great song and the part that goes "every frown
every curse
every fight
it makes this worse
i regret the things that i once said to you
every eyeroll
every sigh
everytime i didn't try
it just makes this worse
it just makes it all worse"
would be a great chorus :p ... lol |
| On June 1st 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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wow, this is really good bra I love it! |
| On June 1st 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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i agree with dead poet |
| On June 1st 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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this was very very emotionally felt for me |


