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This is You Across From Me at 1:05 A.M. |
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This is You Across From Me at 1:05 A.M.
the moonlight
shines so bright
across me
through the blinds
a glow of sliver
lightening your eyes
focusing so heavily on mine
street lights glow
we should turn them off so we can see the stars
and drift away
and find out who we are
I know I am peering
through your glass window
from afar
And I know I shouldn't
but I stare
intent-
ly on you
And you don't stop me
For once
let the setting says the words
That flow alarmingly absent in our heads
the buzzing
of raw air floating
open in the night
the creeping feeling
as the cars go by
but I won't budge, I won't force you to goodbye
don't cry
Your lights never on
You're always gone
This night is something special
It's a rare occasion,
we both are waiting
for the chance to tear us away
I've thought over and over
what was it that drove her
away?
And I know I shouldn't
but I stare
intent-
ly on you
And you don't stop me
For once
let the setting says the words
That flow alarmingly absent in our heads
And I know I shouldn't
but I care
relentlessly for you
And you can't stop me
so please
let the setting say the words
That we're both pondering over in heads
| On June 12th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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cute.very good descriptions. |
| On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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great..very well written |
| On May 26th 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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i LOVE it .... doesn't matter the reason it was written ... it's GREAT ... rlly ... amazing |
| On May 26th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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hmmm u said that twice. |
| On May 19th 2008 lardpiles Said : | |
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ok so I was on my matress with my guitar trying to play a song when I see my ex/nextdoor neighbor's light on, so I watch her across from me, when she sees me I look away and go into a different room. But I wrote about this poem about what I wish'd happened, me staying there and looking her in the eyes. when I'd looked at the clock it was 1:05 am. |
| On May 19th 2008 lardpiles Said : | |
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ok so I was on my matress with my guitar trying to play a song when I see my ex/nextdoor neighbor's light on, so I watch her across from me, when she sees me I look away and go into a different room. But I wrote about this poem about what I wish'd happened, me staying there and looking her in the eyes. when I'd looked at the clock it was 1:05 am. |
| On May 19th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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i can visualize it from over here. but why 1:05, did this really happen? |
| On May 18th 2008 Chula252 Said : | |
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Soft and gentle yet consuming. I especially enjoyed the idea of "let the setting says the words
That flow alarmingly absent in our heads"
Hmmmm I really liked this. Nice write! |


