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This is You Across From Me at 1:05 A.M.

Views (120) Lyric Created on 5-18-08 Flag

the moonlight

shines so bright 

across me

through the blinds


a glow of sliver

lightening your eyes

focusing so heavily on mine


street lights glow

we should turn them off so we can see the stars

and drift away

and find out who we are


I know I am peering

through your glass window

from afar


And I know I shouldn't

but I stare

 intent-

ly on you

And you don't stop me

For once

let the setting says the words

That flow alarmingly absent in our heads


the buzzing

of raw air floating

open in the night


the creeping feeling

as the cars go by

but I won't budge, I won't force you to goodbye

don't cry


Your lights never on

You're always gone

This night is something special

It's a rare occasion,

we both are waiting

for the chance to tear us away

I've thought over and over

what was it that drove her

away?



And I know I shouldn't

but I stare

 intent-

ly on you

And you don't stop me

For once

let the setting says the words

That flow alarmingly absent in our heads


And I know I shouldn't

but I care

relentlessly for you

And you can't stop me

so please

let the setting say the words

That we're both pondering over in heads

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On June 12th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ cute.very good descriptions.
On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 great..very well written
On May 26th 2008 charissa14 Said :
charissa14 i LOVE it .... doesn't matter the reason it was written ... it's GREAT ... rlly ... amazing
On May 26th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said :
BreJroxURsox1 hmmm u said that twice.
On May 19th 2008 lardpiles Said :
lardpiles ok so I was on my matress with my guitar trying to play a song when I see my ex/nextdoor neighbor's light on, so I watch her across from me, when she sees me I look away and go into a different room. But I wrote about this poem about what I wish'd happened, me staying there and looking her in the eyes. when I'd looked at the clock it was 1:05 am.
On May 19th 2008 lardpiles Said :
lardpiles ok so I was on my matress with my guitar trying to play a song when I see my ex/nextdoor neighbor's light on, so I watch her across from me, when she sees me I look away and go into a different room. But I wrote about this poem about what I wish'd happened, me staying there and looking her in the eyes. when I'd looked at the clock it was 1:05 am.
On May 19th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said :
BreJroxURsox1 i can visualize it from over here. but why 1:05, did this really happen?
On May 18th 2008 Chula252 Said :
Chula252 Soft and gentle yet consuming. I especially enjoyed the idea of "let the setting says the words That flow alarmingly absent in our heads" Hmmmm I really liked this. Nice write!