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Something to Say
I found you crying in your shed
You were all torn up about something your father had said
I brushed your eyes away with my hand
And now you look up at me in the eyes
withholding a certain demand
"He said he doesn't love me, that I was just a mistake."
I peer down at her now suddenly awake
She sobbs in my chest, and hicups in my lap
I'm trying to think something to say but all I feel is one big gap.
"I'm sorry." I tell her I try to console, the words just sort of roll
off of my tongue, the words are automatic."
The moment is empty, I can't tell she's so afraid.
She lays down on me, I hold here
but in my mind, she runs away.
| On June 17th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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short n sweet compared to others nice |
| On June 7th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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ahhhh love it (: |
| On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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nice..kinda sad |
| On May 26th 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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nice lol .... yeh ... but "sorry"? lol |
| On May 18th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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this one almost made ME cry. i love it and the fact that it's a sad one. "I'm sorry"??? wow, ur such a guy! |
| On May 16th 2008 Laralei Said : | |
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awww... that's so bittersweet and sad... Good poem, just really sad. |


