lardpiles

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My Poems

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+ 20	I could learn
+ 27	she amazes me
+ 31	I'm the jerk
+ 15	Something to Say
+ 21	This is You Across From Me at 1:05 A.M.
+ 23	Hole in My Heart
+ 16	Ignorant Man (Don't hold them hostage)
+ 19	Nothing but Hell
+ 15	She Wants to Change the World
+ 12	Pushing at the Windows
+ 15	I Can Take Care of You
+ 13	Nice Guy
+ 17	Not Really Here
+ 17	She's Broken
+ 18	At All

I'm the jerk

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Created on 5-16-08

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i'm the jerk who got in the way

I'm the jerk who loved you more and more everyday

I'm the jerk who drived you home when you were drunk

I'm the jerk who hid your weed in my trunk

I'm the jerk who held you when you cried

I'm the jerk who forgave you when you lied

I'm the jerk who licked your wounds when you would bleed

I'm the jerk who ment less to you than biting the hand that feeds

I'm the jerk who made you put down the knife

But somehow I'm the jerk who "ruined your fucking life".

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On June 24th 2008 chickenbroth Said :

	I really loved this, there was a lot of feeling in it. Well put.

On June 8th 2008 shorteternity Said :

	one time my brother had a gf who licked him, it was disturbing. lol but i like this, it's sweet that you cared about her, but sad that she didn't appreciate you. 8)

On June 8th 2008 lardpiles Said :

	that's an expression. u know, lick the wound, make it heal fast?

On June 7th 2008 justjetjustis Said :

	haha thats awesome i agree with 'the branster' licked the blood thats scary :P

On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said :

	very sraight up & to the point..great

On May 26th 2008 charissa14 Said :

	it's pretty good ... definately gets the point accross lol

On May 18th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :

	Wow i love it! really good. Keep writing =)

On May 18th 2008 TheBranster Said :

	geez... what a jerk. well, maybe he and or she did not like it when you licked there blood off there flesh. its kinda creepy to some.

On May 18th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said :

	I don't like this that much...it's a piece of crap really, you should get better.

On May 16th 2008 deadpoet Said :

	woah...this reminds me of a friend and his situation so to say...great poem, the emotion was wonderful

On May 16th 2008 101091 Said :

	Wow, I love this. There is so much raw emotion. I love how it contradicts itself by saying, "I'm the jerk," and then changing to a positive thing. I can't stand people that say that the person who made their life better, was a jerk or even ruined it. Great job.

On May 16th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :

	i looove it its imazing will u checc out my stuff

On May 16th 2008 1234fukdaw0r1d Said :

	Omg I can relate this to my ex boyfriend joey... I love the emotion... its really awesome.. If u get a chance would you comment and rate my poems?

On May 16th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :

	i love it the emotion is amazing!!