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Created on 5-15-08
time after time
i constantly let her down
i disappoint her again and again
but still she forgives me
she takes me back with open arms
she's right at the finish line waiting for me
she amazing me
the way she never gets nervous
the way her eyes can do the talking themselves
and it's ok
because she's no good with words
so we don't speak
she sleeps in my bed
but we don't end up having sex
and it's still beautiful when she wakes up in my arms
it's the feeling i get
when i'm around her, i get queezy
my legs get weak, and on my face I've got one stupid smile
she amazes me
with every day that goes by
she's incredible, i've never felt this way before
another thing is how she can't sense her effect on me
she amazes me with every step that we take
Please Login to post comments| On July 22nd 2008 hollistechik08 Said : | |
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oh this is so sweet love it :) |
| On June 12th 2008 CassieZ Said : | |
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aww this was so cute, I wish a guy wrote cute things about me like that. |
| On June 8th 2008 shorteternity Said : | |
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'it's still beautiful when she wakes up in my arms', that line is the bestest. |
| On June 2nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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like awwwwwww... nice & sweet |
| On May 26th 2008 charissa14 Said : | |
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:p ... again ... sweet lol |
| On May 18th 2008 BreJroxURsox1 Said : | |
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omg you are so nice. I love this this is soooooo sweet. The girl is really lucky to have someone like you, not a lot of guys make poems...havve you ever showed her any of them to her? |
| On May 16th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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awww. i wish i could find a guy that i have that kind of effect on. |
| On May 15th 2008 xoSuMmErRLuVoX Said : | |
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awww. your a lucky guy to have a girl like that! |
| On May 15th 2008 ybforz Said : | |
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I like the emotion behind it, but the flow seems a little off. All in all though, it's good :] |
| On May 15th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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wow thats really good and sweet |
| On May 15th 2008 run4w4ytr4in Said : | |
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I like this very sweet and alot of us can relate to it, well writen! |
