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If I was there
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Created on 4-2-07
Yesterday turned into a shade of Grey
Lost my place to stay and learned a friend in Iraq past away
In a moment it all turns sad in a way that my life now is filled with pain
Wasting away in this world of hate it makes me want to go insain
Lost in a blank rage wanting to load a gun and take lives away
I control my hate and find a place to fade
As my mind wonders hoping everything will be ok
If only i was there to take his place I pray for a miracle that i could make a change
Only if i was there to say goodbye my best friend lays his life to fight
Could have made it right saved his life Fought for him with all my might
I would lay beside him with our pride intertwined
Stay true to our saying SEMPER FI
Please Login to post comments| On April 26th 2007 sunny102 Said : | |
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Wow...great poem...very sad and touching. God Bless you and all our brave Military troops! |
| On April 16th 2007 letlev Said : | |
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Wow... that is one of the main reasons i want to join the Marines, they are faithful tell the last breath |
| On April 14th 2007 ausjo Said : | |
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That's very moving. I felt your pain. I'd be interested in the meaning of that last phrase though. |
| On April 14th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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wow, really good job |
