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Goodbye |
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Loyalty |
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Reallity |
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Guilt of a murder type |
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Dazed and Confused |
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Is it Worth Dying For |
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What is our meaning |
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Rotting Grave |
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Unwanted |
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Waiting for Nothing |
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I like |
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Eternal Darkness |
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The Bends in The Road |
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USMC (Devil Dogs) |
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Support the troops |
Eternal Darkness
Letting go to the overwhelming demons
Put forth my soul beneath the gavil of life
As i watch my mind crushed by the pressures of reallity
My Sanity slowly loses its grip on life
Cloudy memories leaves me grasping for something to hang on to
Yet left unoticed 6 feet beneath the ground
Not even a stone to mark my eternal home
Maggots feed on my flesh for there is no will to stop them
Quickly family and friends move on and forget the past
what was once an internal love
But now a hollow thought of what was once alive
forever resting my head upon the pillow of death
Sleeping to swallow the regrets of what was not accomplished
Wishing I had just one more chance to say goodbye
Receive a name for myself and complete my plans
For one last breath The light flashes and I realize
That once was a peaceful halo above my head
Is now a grey ring of sadness
Fallowed by a reaper from the darkness
stalked like a gazelle by a blood thirst lion
taken down through the grip of its claws
the Demise of my heart procedes with no stop in sight
the neverending pain buildes its nest in my chest
And like a river in a drought I cease to be
| On April 3rd 2007 MadameEmma16 Said : | |
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wow. the imagery in this is amazing! |
| On March 21st 2007 sasuke000 Said : | |
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Sounds like u r sad about something u can tell me if u need 2! |


