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this is about my recent piercing.Rate this Poem
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All the Way Through
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Created on 6-16-07
smell the antiseptic
feel the sting
room smells like clean
it's too clean
holding a hand
breathing deep
feel the needle
near the skin
pain ripping
through my septum
feeling like
a continual bee sting
"It's done" a voice says
i feel adrenaline
i feel pain
but i feel happy.
Please Login to post comments| On June 16th 2007 MuteHotline Said : | |
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First thought? Emo. Then I realize "holding a hand". It must be at the doctors. *pointless comment* |
