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All in my Head
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Created on 5-28-07
broken haunting screaming knight
fallen dying taking flight
human laughing living life
mortal dying holding knife
haunted burning flaming house
rabid bleeding biting mouse
hollow sleeping flaming eyes
empty weeping screaming lies
beloved loving caring child
hatred killing being wild
sleeping dying taking pills
drunken driving flying kills
fallen dying taking flight
human laughing living life
mortal dying holding knife
haunted burning flaming house
rabid bleeding biting mouse
hollow sleeping flaming eyes
empty weeping screaming lies
beloved loving caring child
hatred killing being wild
sleeping dying taking pills
drunken driving flying kills
Please Login to post comments| On June 21st 2007 x3m0l0v3x Said : | |
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I love how deep this poem makes you think. It's like some insomnia nightmare, or horid day dream you can't escape. |
| On May 31st 2007 hardcoremm Said : | |
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nice, i like how all lines relate to their line,
and only their line.
Like a cause and effect sort of thing.
nice work. |
